Question

书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）

你班Carl同学最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Carl写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。

注意事项：1.不得出现学校和本人真实姓名。

2．下列表格中的内容不得遗漏。

3．字数：90左右。

Carl

A Grade 9 student

Be crazy about basketball

Have lots of homework

Stay up late

Low marks in exams

Feel stressed

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you._____________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

Answer 1

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you. You are a Grade student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give up it . You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school.

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。