Question

【题目】根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍自己的家人，朋友，收藏品和爱好。（50词左右）

Name: Mary

Family: father, mother, brother.

Friends: Cindy, Sam, Alan

Collection（收藏品）：7 baseballs, 5 basketballs, 9 volleyballs

Like: milk, carrots, ice-cream, chicken

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone, my name is Mary . as you know I am a clever girl. I have a nice family. There is my father , my mother ,my brother and I . My family are all so cute. They are so lovely. we all get on well with each other. Do you know I have three good friends? they are Cindy, Sam and Alan. All of us like to collect balls. In my collection , I have seven baseballs, five basketballs and nine volleyballs. I am not only good at volleyball but also am interested in basketball. I often play balls with my friends after school, so I am very healthy. Besides, I eat very well. I like milk , carrots and chicken every day, although ice-cream is my favourite, I just eat it once a week because it is not so good for my health if I eat it too much. Now , you see, I have a very healthy life.

Thank you so much .that`s all.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求学生用所学的英语知识，简明扼要的写一篇Mary的自我介绍，其中要包括自己的家庭成员，朋友，业余爱好和饮食方面。

【亮点说明】该文章能够严格按照题目要求，全面的写出各个要点，语言生动，思路清晰，前后行文环环相扣，要点连贯，其中不乏漂亮的短语和宾语从句，让步状语从句和条件状语从句。例如，get on well with each other ；not only…but also…; be good at; be interested in; once a week. 宾语从句: Do you know I have three good friends? 让步状语从句和条件状语从句套用：although ice-cream is my favourite, I just eat it once a week because it is not so good for my health if I eat it too much. 所以纵观全文，不失为一篇佳作。