Question

3．无论在学校或家庭，都有许多针对青少年的规则（rules），请写一篇80词以上的短文，分别谈谈你最赞同和最反感的一两条，同时说说自己对这些规则的看法或改进建议．内容要求：
1．介绍一两条你最赞同的规则，并陈述理由；
2．介绍一两条你最反感的规则，并提出改进建议．
3．对规则的利弊做一个简单的小结．
注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容谈谈你最赞同和最反感的一两条规则．时态为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．介绍一两条你最赞同的规则，并陈述理由；
2．介绍一两条你最反感的规则，并提出改进建议．
3．对规则的利弊做一个简单的小结．
常用到的重点句型和短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
focus on 专注于
as for 至于
in one's opinion 依某人看来
too…to do sth 太…而不能…
参考句子：
They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．
本句中的when引导的是时间状语从句，其中too…to do sth表示太…而不能…．
But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．
句中是it 作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语的应用，so that引导的是结果状语从句，they can be always effective and accepted by us．是被动语态的运用．

解答 We have many rules in our school．Some are good for us，I think，but others are not．For example，we are required to wear school uniforms every day．It helps us have an easy life without too much attention to dress and appearance，so we can just focus on our school work．（赞同的规则）However，as for"It's not allowed to bring mobile phones to school"，I don't think it's a good rule．．（不赞同的规则）Nowadays we are in IT generation，and mobile phones are really necessary in everyday lives even though for teenagers．In my opinion，the rule can be changed a little like this"It's not allowed to use mobile phones in class．（改进建议）
We do need some rules both in schools or families．They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．（高分句型）But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．（高分句型）（利弊总结）

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．