Question

19．假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游（outing）．请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为"A pleasant outing"的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛．

A pleasant outing
时间	上周末
参加者	你和…
地点	北山公园（the North Hill Park）
活动	骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏…
感受	…

要求：
（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
（3）词数：80～110个．
参考词汇：go for an outing；  climb the hill；  have a picnic
A pleasant outing
Last weekend，I went for an outing with my classmates．At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate．We went to the North Hill Park by bike．On the way，we were so excited that we sang loudly．When we arrived there，we started to climb the hill at once．We had a picnic on the top of the hill．After that，we walked down the path and had a rest．Later，some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily．We didn't go back until 4：00 p．m..We were tired but very happy．
What a pleasant outing it was!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"A pleasant outing"为题说说上周末的一次郊游．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1时间 上周末
2参加者 你和…
3地点 北山公园（the North Hill Park）
4活动 骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏…
5感受

常用到的重点短语：
by+交通工具 乘坐…
on the way 在路上
so…that如此…以至于
at once立刻
have a rest休息
not…until…直到…才…

高分句型：
1．①On the way，we were ②so excited that we sang loudly．
①on the way 在路上
②so…that如此…以至于，中间加上形容词或副词，这里是形容词excited，that引导的是结果状语从句．
2．What a pleasant outing it was!
感叹句的运用．what+a/an+形容词+名词单数+主语+谓语！

解答 A pleasant outing
Last weekend，I went for an outing with my classmates．（时间和参加者）At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate．We went to the North Hill Park by bike．（地点）On the way，we were so excited that we sang loudly．（高分句型）When we arrived there，we started to climb the hill at once．We had a picnic on the top of the hill．After that，we walked down the path and had a rest．Later，some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily．（活动）We didn't go back until 4：00 p．m..We were tired but very happy．
What a pleasant outing it was!（感受）（高分句型）

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．