Question

【题目】书面表达（共15分）

你长大了想干什么？再根据下表介绍一下你班同学的理想。（60词左右）

Name Want to be Reason

Lindadoctor can help patients(病人)

Johnpoliceman it’s an exciting job.

Bobreporter likes talking with people

Amyteacher likes children and teaching

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Answer 1

【答案】

I want to be a writer when I grow up. I think a good writer can write many interesting stories. And they can bring happiness to many people. My classmates have different ideas. Linda wants to be doctor, because she wants to help patients. John wants to be a policeman. He thinks it is an exciting job. And Bob would like to be a reporter, because he likes talking with people. To be a teacher is Amy’s dream. She likes children and teaching.

【解析】

试题分析： 这篇作文围绕未来的工作写作，内容包括自己以及四个同学想成为什么，以及原因。题目已经给出了很详细的信息和英语提示，写作时只要把各个部分连接起来，组成完整的句子，或者加上一些连接词，就能完成写作。写作时要注意句子的完整性和主谓一致。

写作亮点：这篇文章要点完整，句子表达准确流利。关于未来工作的表达使用了不同的表达方式，如 want to be想成为；would like to be愿意成为；To be a teacher is Amy’s dream.成为一名老师是艾米的梦想。另外文章使用了一些连接词，如and而且，because因为。