题目内容
书面表达( 共20分)
根据表格内所给内容,适当补充一些内容, 以 Lions in Danger 为题写一篇100 字左右的文章。
Introduction | yellow, tiger’s cousin, the king of animals ,run fast… |
Living place | In Africa and some parts of Asia |
Food | Other animals |
Why in danger | Not enough food, water or living places, kill…for meat and fur… |
What we can do | Stop killing, more nature parks… |
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Lions in danger
Lions are the kings of the forest. They are yellow ones and run very fast. They are called “tiger’s cousin”. Most of lions live in Africa and some parts of Asia. And they eat other animals for food.
However, now it is said that Lions are in danger because they have not enough food and clean water. What’s more, they have no living places. Everywhere they live are full of danger because some people kill them for food and get their fur to sell.
How dander the lions are in! In this situation, we must make every effort of us to protect them. For example, we can appeal to the government to take actions to punish all kinds of illegal actions and we can use media to raise people’s recognition for protecting animals. Besides we should donate money to build more nature parks for lions.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲型作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: it is said that据说;make every efforts to do努力去做某事等。学习中应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:话题作文。