Question

【题目】1.手机发明于1973年

2.手机用于和别人交流（communicate with sb）

3.青少年们能不能使用手机，

4.使用手机的利与弊

Answer 1

【答案】

The mobile phone was invented in 1973. Nowadays more and more people use mobile phones. It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. This is the advantage of the phone. On the other hand, the ringing sound affects others, meanwhile it does great harm to our health. So we should use mobile phones in proper way.

But should the middle school students take their mobile phones to school? I think the answer is “no”. Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study. It may make the students being lazy, they may do bad in their study.

【解析】

这篇短文要求我们根据提示写出手机的优势和劣势，还要写出自己的观点关于中学生是不是应该往学校带手机。我们在写作时要注意：1. 注意时态，要用一般现在时。2. 要把提示内容全部写进去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要单一。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求写出了手机的优势和劣势以及作者的观点，观点准确，内容完整。2.本文句式不单一，有it做形式主语的句子：It is very convenient for us to communicate with others. 有定于从句：Because the mobile phones usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study.