Question

书面表达。共1题，计15分。

莹莹的父母外出打工了，她在学校寄宿学习。开始她感到不习惯，在老师和朋友们的帮助下，现在学习、生活非常好。假设你是莹莹，请根据下表提示给父母写一封信，介绍你的在校情况和今后的打算。

1	Subjects	favorite, do well in
2	Activities	competition, sports
3	Friends	get on well
4	Spare time	wash clothes, reading
5	Plan	work hard

要求：1、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

2、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；

3、可以适当发挥；

4、词数：80词左右。文章开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mom and Dad,

How time flies! I moss you very much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But ow I enjoy my school life.

Yours,

YingYing

Answer 1

Dear Mom and Dad,

How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life. We have nine subjects at school. My favorite subject is history. It's interesting and I can learn a lot from it. With the help of my teacher, I do better in English. There are many activities at school. Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize. I have made lots of friends here and we get on well with each other. In my spare time, I usually wash my clothes or do some reading. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. I'm stronger than before. Don't worry about me. I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.

Yours,

Yingying

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。表格中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。主要内容包括：一是关于学科方面，包括你最喜欢的学科和擅长的学科等。二是关于活动方面，比赛和体育活动有什么等。三是交友方面，你与同学们相处情况。四是业余时间的活动，如洗衣服、读书……五是你的计划，如今后要努力学习……这5方面的内容是我们写作的根据，但还需要我们自己去充实一些内容，让短文更加完整、充实。我们需要发挥想象力，把我们平时积累的知识加以运用。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接要紧密，使文意连贯，表达流畅。时态方面要注意，如Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize.等，叙述过去发生的事情要用过去时态。如I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.对将来的打算计划要用一般将来时。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕要点，向妈妈讲述自己的一些情况，并告诉妈妈自己的计划等。叙述要点完整、正确，清晰，语言连贯流畅，有效地传达了规定的信息。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得很好，如It's interesting and I can learn a lot from it..等。这些内容都比较符合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如How time flies! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.等。

考点：图表类作文。