Question

【题目】书面表达

动物和人类共处一个世界，是人类的朋友。有的动物美丽，有的动物可爱，有的动物活泼，有的动物腼腆。你喜欢哪种动物？为什么？请写一篇60词左右的短文介绍你最喜欢的动物。题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My favorite animal

There are many animals in the world. But _________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My favorite animal

There are many animals in the world. But what's my favorite animal, do you know？ Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She looks kind of lazy but very cute. She is our friend. She likes to eat bamboos. She is very friendly to people. She is black and white. She has two black ears and eyes. And she also has black legs and arms.

Now do you know what the animal is? Yes, she is a panda. I like her because she is a symbol of friendship. And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in the world，very much，be from，kind of，like to do，be friendly to，black and white，a symbol of friendship，tell sb. sth.等。而But what's my favorite animal, do you know？/I like her because she is a symbol of friendship./And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.等复杂从句结构的运用，使得内容丰富，表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。