Question

【题目】书面表达

不同的人有不同的爱好。下面表格中列举了几个人的爱好、他们的爱好持续的时间以及一些相关的信息。请你以 “Different People, Different Hobbies” 为题并做适当发挥，写一篇80词左右的短文。

Name	Hobby	How long	More information
Toby	Swimming	For 5 years	Strong and healthy
Mike	Collecting coins	Since he was ten	Over 300 coins
Jane	Seeing English movies	For three years	Relaxed, a good way to learn English

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Answer 1

【答案】Different People, Different Hobbies

I have three good friends. They have different hobbies. Toby likes swimming. He can swim very well. He has been swimming for 5 years. He is very strong and quite healthy. Mike likes collecting kinds of coins. He has been collecting them since he was ten. So far he has collected more than 300 coins. They are from his parents and his friends. Some of the coins are from his own country, some are from other countries. Jane likes English very much. She likes seeing English movies. From the English movies, she not only learned a lot of English words but also she can sing many English songs. She thinks she can be relaxed. She often says to me that seeing English movies is a good way to learn English.

【解析】

写作

本文需要根据表格，描述3个人的爱好、爱好持续的时间以及一些相关信息。重点是要正确使用时态，通过持续的时间可以初步确定在描述的时候可以借助现在完成进行时，为了避免死板，要善于加入一些句子或短语使得文章更加连贯。

写作亮点：

文章开头点明主题（I have three good friends. They have different hobbies.），语言简练。在描述每个人的爱好时正确使用了时态，以Toby的描述为例，描述他的爱好是游泳用一般现在时陈述事实即可（Toby likes swimming.），要想描述他游泳了多久，持续了多长时间用现在完成进行时（He has been swimming for 5 years.），描述他的身体状况时仍然使用一般现在时陈述事实（He is very strong and quite healthy.）。正确运用时态来实现写作目的十分关键。在描述Mike的爱好时讲到他收集了超过300个硬币，加入了时间状语（so far）配合现在完成时，是写作的亮点，说明作者对完成时的时间状语学习清晰。