Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是林涛，上个月回到了家乡，发现家乡变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为"Changes in My Hometown"的短文，词数100左右，提示如下：

1．我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或走路出行；

2．现在已变成了现代化城镇，建起座座高楼，有很多宽阔的马路。我们住的小区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便；

3．但是，这些变化也给我们带来了许多问题，例如：……

4．我的想法是……

Changes in My Hometown

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Answer 1

【答案】I'm Lin Tao.Last month I went back to my hometown.Great changes have taken place in my hometown. My hometown used to be a quiet small town There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars,so it's easy to travel around. However,the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example,the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。假设你是林涛，上个月回到了家乡，发现家乡变化很大。要求以"Changes in My Hometown"为题，根据提示材料写一篇短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。