Question

【题目】手机是现代人必备的通讯工具之一。它不仅可以用来打电话, 还可以用来做很多其他事情。例如: 听歌、玩游戏、上网聊天、发邮件、看电影等。它一般是用塑料(plastic)和金属(metal)制造的。

请根据以上提示写一篇短文, 介绍一下手机,开头已给出。词数80个左右。

Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our life._________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our life. Nearly everyone has his or her own mobile phone except some children or very old people. They are not only used for making a phone, but also for doing many things, such as listening to music, playing computer games, chatting online, sending emails and watching movies. They are usually made of plastic and metal. I think mobile phones will be better and better and bring us more happiness.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，介绍了手机这种生活用品。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查说明文的写法和被动句的使用。注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：be used for…；be made of…;I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了手机在生活中越来越受欢迎，接下来介绍手机的广泛用途和手机的制作材料，最后作者对于手机，发表了自己的观点和看法。此处用了become more and more important, not only…but also, such as，listen to 等，这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。