Question

【题目】书面表达

五一期间你参加了我们学校举办的连云港三日游，根据下面的提示写一篇100词左右的短文。

第一天：新浦公园：划船，听京剧，看时装表演，乘坐激动人心的过山车

动物园： 看动物，如猴子，狮子等

第二天：花果山：欣赏美丽的自然景色，看到许多西游记（Journey to the West ）里的人物：唐僧，孙悟空，猪八戒。到达江苏省最高峰----玉女峰（the Yunu peak ）。让人有一种腾云驾雾（ride a cloud ）的感觉。

第三天：海滨浴场（seaside swimming pool）：玩沙子，放风筝，打沙滩排球,吃美味的海鲜。

My Best Holiday

Answer 1

【答案】My Best Holiday

On May Day, our school held a 3-day trip to Lianyungang. On the first day, we got to the Xinpu Park. We went boating on the lake and listened to Beijing Opera. We watched the fashion show and took the exciting roller-coaster . then we went to the animal zoo.There we saw many animals, such as monkeys,lions and so on. We enjoyed ourselves .

On the second day. We went to the Huaguo Mountain. On it we enjoyed the beautiful natural views, we saw many characters in the play ---Iourney to the West, such as Tang sen, Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie.then we arrived at the first highest mountain in Jiangsu province—the Yunu peak. Standing on the the Yunu peak made us feel like riding a cloud. All of us felt the nature is great. On the third day. We got to the seaside swimming pool. On the beach, we played with sand and flew kites. We played with sand –volleyball happily. In the evening, we tasted the delicious seafood. It’s a wonderful trip. We will never forget it!

【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据提示，介绍自己参加学校组织的去连云港的三日游。题目中已给出了具体的写作内容，非常详细，我们应用正确的语言将这些内容表达出来。在写作的内容上，学生们就不用担心，按照题目中的提纲来叙述即可。难点有两个：首先是英语的表达习惯与汉语是不同的，要注意语法的规范，使用正确的时态和人称，多使用简单句，保证句子的准确，并点缀几个并列句或复合句，调整文章的节奏。其次需要注意文章表达的连贯性和流畅，句子之间使用连接成分，如连词或副词等。