题目内容
【题目】书面表达。(共15分)
今天是7月5日,星期日。假如你和同学去旅游了,请以日记的形式写一篇不少于80词的短文,描述一下此次旅游经历和感受。
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【答案】
Sunday, July 5th Sunny
Today I went on a trip with① my classmates.
At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bicycle②. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of③ the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4: 00 pm.
We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant trip it was!④
【解析】
【名师点评】◆本文运用了三步五要素法写日记, 将当天所发生的事情进行了描述,语言准确恰当。
◆本文的添彩点:①go on a trip with sb. 和某人去旅行;②by bicycle 骑自行车;③on the top of 在……的顶上;④What a pleasant trip it was! 多么愉快的旅行呀! 本句为感叹句,抒发了作者的旅行感受。