Question

【题目】假设你叫李明，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐张航。请根据表格内容，写一封80词左右的推荐信给王老师。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

姓名	张航
特长	精通电脑，擅长演讲
性格、品质	自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人
个人事迹	经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外的工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎。

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Answer 1

【答案】I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers. He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school acivities.

He is very helpful, too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，向老师推荐张航做我们的班长。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good at, do well in, spend+时间+doing, too, mind doing, try one’s best to do, be popular with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。