Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你校计划于下周六上午主办题为“My Dream”的英语演讲比赛，你准备参加。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿：

1. 对梦想的看法；

2. 你的梦想；

3. 你打算如何实现你的梦想。

注意：1. 120-150词；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Good morning, my dear friends!

I’m very glad to stand here to give you a speech about dreams. Of course, it is true that different persons have different dreams. A dream is like a light tower, showing the way when one is sailing on the sea. Without it, one may not know where he goes or even gets lost in life. So have a dream, and that really matters.

What is my dream? When I was a little child, I wanted to be a great judge and protect the rights of citizens. But as time goes by, things have changed, and so has my dream. Now I’ve decided to become a doctor, which can help reduce pain in patients or even save their lives. I believe the job is helpful and worth doing. But how to make it come true?

I know it is really a big challenge for me, though. Whatever it is, I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I will spend more time learning my lessons, so that I can go to my ideal university. At the same time I am going to expose myself to books on medicine. I am sure I will achieve my dream. As a saying goes: If you can dream it, you can do it.

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语gets lost迷失；decided to do 决定做某事；be worth doing 值得做某事；come true 实现；spend time in doing 花费时间做某事；A dream is like a light tower, showing the way when one is sailing on the sea这个句子中showing 做伴随状语；But as time goes by, things have changed, and so has my dream.这个句子中so 助动词/系动词 /情态动词 + 主语，表示主语也符合这种情况 ；As a saying goes: If you can dream it, you can do it.用一句话谚语做为总结。

考点： 提纲类作文