Question

上周末Anna去商店购物。下面四幅图描述的是Anna 购物回家时在路上所发生的事。
请以“ What an Unlucky Day” 为题写一篇短文。

Answer 1

What an Unlucky Day
Last weekend Anna went shopping.With full bags of goods in both hands, she headed for a nearby bus stop, tired and hungry. She was waiting for the bus when it began to rain. After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded with passengers. When it was her turn to get on the bus, someone said, “ Sorry, no more room.” Quite disappointed, Anna had to take a tax. Half way home, however, the taxi broke down. Hardly had she got out of the taxi when a bus passed by. It was empty, but she had missed it! What an unlucky day!

试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1. 认真读图，可知四幅图讲述的是Anna 购物回家时在路上所发生的事。2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰，语言简洁，应用了一些较好的短语和句子：head for“前往”， break down.“爆发”，.With full bags of goods in both hands, she headed for a nearby bus stop, tired and hungry.这句话用了with复合结构， She was waiting for the bus when it began to rain.这句话用了固定句型， After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded with passengers. 这句话用了宾语从句，When it was her turn to get on the bus, 这句话用了it做形式主语， Quite disappointed, Anna had to take a tax. 这句话用了形容词做状语， Hardly had she got out of the taxi when a bus passed by. 这句话用了倒装句。