Question

假定你是李华, 将去英国某学校短期学习, 被安排住在Smith先生家。请你写封短信与其取得联系并询问以下情况：

1. 住宿条件；                    2. 膳食安排；             3. 交通情况。

注意： 1. 词数100左右；        2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

   3. 开头语己为你写好。

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m Li Hua from China, writing to ask about my stay with your family.    ______________              

___________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                  Yours,

              Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m Li Hua from China, writing to ask about my stay with your family.

First, I’d like to express my thanks for your kindness of having me. To better prepare for my life in Britain, I’d like to know if I’ll have a room for myself and if there is a computer I can use. I plan to have lunch at school, and it would be great if I could join you for breakfast and supper . Finally, could you tell me how far your place is from the school？Is it within walking distance or do I need to take a bus？

 I’m so excited about my visit to the UK. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

                                                         Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

解析:

本文要开门见山，首先点明主旨。可以应用一些比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。文章句式精炼。用熟悉的句型、短语去表达。语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用要注意，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。