题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Selena来信告知她全家到湖南旅行的消息,并希望你 能推荐熟悉的旅游路线,如“长沙之行”“凤凰之行”等。请你给她回信,内容包括:
1.你推荐的路线;
2.你推荐的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。
Dear Selena,
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Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Selena
I am more than delighted to know that your family and you are about to visit Hunan. Since I was born and raised in the capital city, Changsha, it’s my pleasure to suggest a wonderful trip to you here.
To begin with, the Tianxin Tower is a place that you can’t miss, as it stands in the south of the old city, going through the hard experience and witnessing the big changes of Changsha. Moreover, for a foodie, there is no better place than Pozi Street, where you can enjoy some delicious food like spicy crayfish. Besides, if you want to buy some souvenirs, you may pay a visit to the shopping malls, which are centered around the Wuyi square.
Hope you’ll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch.
Your sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于书信应用文。要求考生推荐熟悉的旅游路线给外国朋友。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态以一般现在时为主。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达欢迎
2.提出相关建议
1)游玩地点。(the Tianxin Tower)
2)吃喝地点。(Pozi Street)
3) 购物地点。(the Wuyi square)
3. 寒暄结束。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Be more than; be about to do; it’s +n. +to do; go through; witness; pay a visit; be centered around; keep in touch…
第三步:连词成句
1. I am more than delighted to know that your family and you are about to visit Hunan.
2. it’s my pleasure to suggest you a wonderful trip here.
3. As it stands in the south of the old city, going through the hard experience and witnessing the big changes of Changsha
4.You may pay a visit to the shopping malls, which are centered around the Wuyi square
5 Hope you ll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:To begin with; First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改