Question

 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 am and ends at 3:30 pm. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities. For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and take exercise for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest,sit by the lake and listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

Answer 1

  My dream school starts at 8 ： 30 am and ends at 3 ： 30 pm.

  They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. There We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have don't much more time with after-school activities. For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and take exercise for one hour ev-hours ery day.

  My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds looks of Yh^ flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest,sit by the lake and listening A musitting to sic. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only helpful our teachers but also our friends.