此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误.该行右边横线上画一个勾0/):如有错误.则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词.并也用斜线划掉．此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线.在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾0/）：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．注意：原行没有错的不要改．（请在答题卡的指定位置作答）短文改错：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing to tell you about my recent holiday，that was            （76）that改为which
a disaster．The young man at the travel agency tells us that         （77）tells改为told
the price including four nights in a five-star hotel with a view．   （78）including改为included
But it was clear not a five-star hotel．There were only two small   （79）clear改为clearly
beds in our family room，but our son had to sleep on the floor．   （80）but改为and/so
There weren't clean towels in the bathroom and there were             （81）√
hundred of insects all over the place．Yes，there was a view         （82）hundred改为hundreds
from  bedroom window，but it was a view of a motorway and         （83）加the
the airport．There was noise all night and they couldn't sleep．      （84）they改为we
No drinks were included in the breakfast，and we paid for extra!（85）for去掉
We demand a refund （退款）．

Yours faithfully，
Mr．& Mrs．Masterson．

分析这是一封投诉信，讲述了作者度假的经历．旅行社的服务和承诺的不一致．住宿条件，浴室，还有周围的环境都很差．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
   I'm writing to tell you about my recent holiday，that was
                                                                          which
a disaster．The young man at the travel agency tells us that
                                                                      told
the price including four nights in a five-star hotel with a view．
             included
But it was clear not a five-star hotel．There were only two small
              clearly
beds in our family room，but our son had to sleep on the floor．
                                      and/so
There weren't clean towels in the bathroom and there were

hundred of insects all over the place．Yes，there was a view
hundreds
from∧bedroom window，but it was a view of a motorway and
   加the
the airport．There was noise all night and they couldn't sleep．
                                                               we
No drinks were included in the breakfast，and we paid for extra!
                                                                              去掉
We demand a refund （退款）．
1．that改为which．句中是一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是holiday，要用which来引导．
2．tells改为told．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
3．including改为included．句中include是作谓语，表示过去的事实，要用一般过去时态．
4．clear改为clearly．句中是修饰谓语动词，要用副词．
5．but改为and/so．句意表达的是承接关系，不是转折．
6．正确．
7．hundred改为hundreds．句中hundred表达抽象的数量，要用hundreds of短语，表示成百上千的．
8．加the．句中表达的是特指，要用定冠词．
9．they改为we．逻辑错误，句意指代的我们．
10．for去掉．句中paid后接的是支付的费用，不是对象，不要介词．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．