题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.
1.the ---a
2.was去掉
3.there--where
4.on---for
5.firefly---fireflies
6.seem后面加to
7.think--thinking
8.luckily ---lucky
9.her--him
10.helps—helped
【解析】
试题分析：本文作者回忆了父亲给他的影响，表达了对父亲的感激。父亲是一个生物学教授，知识非常渊博。在作者小时候父亲常常带他去实验室和野外玩，在那里作者认识了很多动物，也培养了对大自然的爱。
1.考查冠词。My father was the biology professor. 此处是指父亲的职业，“他是一个教授”，不是特指概念，所以把the改为a。
2. 考查动词。When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab。Be used to do“被用来去做”，used to do“过去常常”，通过句意可知此处指父亲过去常常带我去实验室，故把was去掉。
3.—where 考查关系副词。……, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals。从结构可知此处是非限制性定语从句，句子是主谓宾结构，判断用关系副词，而先行词是表示地点的词，故把there改为where。
4. 考查介词。He often took me on a walk in the backyard. 从语境可知父亲常常带我去后院散步，此处是表示目的，所以把on改为for。
5.firefly---fireflies 考查名词。We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. Firefly是可数名词，此处指类别，应该用复数形式，故把firefly改为fireflies。
6. 考查非谓语动词。He seemed know everything about wildlife.。固定短语：seem to do sth“似乎做某事”，在seem后面加to。
7.—thinking 考查非谓语动词。Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life,…..从句子结构可知此处是非谓语做状语，think和句子主语之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以把think改为thinking。
8. 考查形容词。I feel very luckily. Feel是系动词，后面应该用形容词做表语，把luckily改为lucky。
9..考查代词。 I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her.根据上文内容可知此处是指父亲，对“我”的影响，所以把her改为him。
10.—helped 考查动词时态。He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me. 文章是回忆父亲，全文都用的是过去时，所以把helps改为helped。
考点：考查短文改错
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