题目内容

：写作（共二节，满分40分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As a Senior Three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have many to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation to those stood by me all the way, teachers, parents and friend included. Without their help, my life will be different. Secondly, it’s high time I said sorry to the classmates I once hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made my mind to make every effort to study, as I know hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope which all the young fellows should make full use of time, so time and tide wait for no man.

 

1.after改为before

2.many改为much

3.stood改为standing

4.friend改为friends

5.will改为would

6.firm改为firmly

7.made后加up

8.去掉a

9.which改为that

10.so改为because

【解析】

试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、副词、现在分词作定语、固定短语、同位语从句、状语从句、虚拟语气等语法知识的掌握情况。

1.As a Senior Three student”可知，作为一名高三的学生，再过不久就要毕业了，故把after改为before。

2. much吃很多，这里指“我有很多要和学弟学妹分享”，故把many改为much。

3.stood改为standing。

4.friend改为friends。

5.will改为would。

6. firmly believe我坚信，故把firm改为firmly。

7. up one’s mind to do sth下定决心做某事，故在made后加up。

8.去掉a。

9.all the young fellows should make full use of time”不缺少成分，说明不是定语从句，用that引导同位语从句来对hope进行补充说明，故把which改为that。

10.time and tide wait for no man大家应该充分利用时间，因为时不我待，前后是因果关系，结果在前，原因在后，故把so改为because。

考点：考查冠词；名词；副词；现在分词作定语；固定短语；同位语从句；状语从句；虚拟语气

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