Question

假如你是张华， 近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们滥养宠物的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持。信的内容应包括以下要点：
1.宠物过多，噪音扰民； 2. 污染环境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4. 传播疾病。
注意：1.词数不少于100;
2.信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.
                                                                                           
                                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                              
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear editor,
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.
I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortale. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sencerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Hua

试题分析：本文是一封书信应用文，向报社反映目前人们滥养宠物的问题。问题提示较详细，学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题，根据提示写作主要有三段内容，第一段已经给出，开门见山表明要反映的问题；第二段反映此问题的原因及危害；第三段结束，提出自己的希望。另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时。人称用第三人称。再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语，应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章符合书信的写作要求，要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如for the following reasons，attracted much attention，和Taking all these factors into consideration, 并用分词作状语， 还运用了主语从句：it’s widely accepted that……；。The most important is that……，定语从句：as is known to us； which makes people quite uncomfortale；where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people.等。并注意了句子的衔接如：First of all，What’s more，等。