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I happened to read in the paper about your summer camp a couple of days ago, which is why I¡¯m now writing to you to present myself for the camp.
I¡¯m Li Hua, a boy of 18, presently attending Kunming No. 1 High School, Yunnan Province. I like music, especially classical music. I¡¯m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I¡¯ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. I appreciate friends¡¯ help and I¡¯m willing to help anyone in need. As a teenager, I love life and Mother Nature; and I love peace. I hate any form of violence.
I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures. I¡¯d appreciate it if this desire of mine can be met.
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Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I¡¯ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days.
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Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
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