Question

中国人不善于向家人表达“爱”，但你认为告诉家人你爱他们很重要。请以“Ways to express love to my family”为题，写出如何向家人表达“爱”。

提示：1．如果父母生日，当面向他们说“我爱你们”‘

2．经常帮助家人做家务；

3．经常拥抱父母；

4．你自己的看法。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Ways to express love to my family

                                                                                  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

There are various ways to express love . I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them .

I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them .

Besides , I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .

Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days .

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文是关于如何向家人表达爱；文章只给出部分要点，需要考生做适当的发挥。可以从认真学习，不让父母操心的角度出发。在审题的时候要注意时态同时注意要点要完全，不能有遗漏。写作时使用合适的连接词，让文章更流畅。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文属于半开放性作文，给考生的发挥余地较大，在个人观点方面可以从认真学习，不让父母操心的角度出发。同时使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章有较好的文采。