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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I have been feeling tired these days and often find hard to concentrate on my study. My teacher told me that it was the sign of anxiety. She advised me to read an article about reducing tension and improving brain efficient. I listened to her and found some useful ways in it. I began to form a habit of talking a nap for 15minutes at noon and try to spare 30 minutes a day to get move. A walk on the playground was beneficial. Besides, following the author’s advices, I would play words with friends during class break, which made the brain refreshed and worked better. Having fun with friends is really a good way of becoming relaxed.

Being third may influence our mood though it has positive side. The brain can be the more creative. The author reminds what we should not fall asleep with brush in hand and we had better do something creative.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】这篇文章主要讲了在作者对学习有些懈怠的时候，老师给他一些建议，这些建议令作者受益匪浅。

考查形式宾语。to concentrate on my study是真正的宾语，find之后需要一个形式宾语，所以find之后加it。

考查固定短语。a sign of迹象，是固定短语，所以the改成a。

考查名词。作improving的宾语，所以用名词，efficient改成efficiency。

考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以try改成tried。

考查固定短语。get moving行动起来，是固定短语，所以move改成moving。

考查名词单复数。advice是不可数名词，所以advices改成advice。

考查固定结构。make sb do sth.意思为“使某人做某事”，其中make后面的不定式短语要省略to，所以worked改成work。

考查连词。疲倦可能会影响我们的情绪，但是它是有积极的一面的。所以though改成but。

考查宾语从句。that we should not fall asleep with brush in hand and we had better do something creative. 是一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有什么实际意义，所以what改成that。