Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I will cost this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is

modern, but there are still some problems, such as air pollution and noisy. In

the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quietly life. Where, the air

is fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are singing. I can go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. I can also climb the hills. Both of these will interesting and good for your health. Above all, I can learn more about the nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. Now, I am looking forward to leave.

 

Answer 1

1.cost→spend

2.去掉but

3.noisy→noise

4.quietly→quiet

5.Where→There

6.both→all

7.will后加be

8.your→my

9.去掉nature前的the

10.leave→leaving

【解析】

试题分析：

1.cost this summer holiday in the countryside. cost:“花费，以…为代价”，所以应改为spend，spend除了有“花费”之义外，还可以翻译为“度过”。且cost主语 往往为sth或it。

2.but there are still some problems. 固定用法。although/though不能与but连用，所以要去掉but。

3.noisy.“such as”为介词短语，后面需要接名词或代词，所以要把adj. noisy改成n. noise。

4. quietly life.quietly→quiet 此处需要形容词来修饰名词life，故把adv. quietly改成adj.quiet。

5.Where，the air is fresh and the water is clean.该句是表达肯定含义的并列句。所以要用地点状语用there。

6.Both of these will interesting and good for your health.此处的代词指代上文的四个活动，而both只能指两者，所以改为all，all指代三者或三者以上。

7.Both of these will interesting。will后加be 因为will不能单独做谓语。

8.→my 根据行文逻辑。

9.

10.“look forward to”中to为prep，所以要把动词leave动名词化，即改为leaving。