Question

今天，你收到了好友小玲的一封信，信中她说过年想买一部手机，为此她征求你的意见，根据以下提示，请你写一封信建议她不要买手机的回信。
提示：
1．发短信会占据太多的学习时间。                 2．校内不许用手机，因为会打扰别人
3．还经常会收到一些欺骗性的不良短信       4．因手机费用而增加父母的负担。
要求：
1．词数120左右。             2．请在答题卡上作答。
开头结尾已给出不计入总数。
词汇：欺骗性的不良短信：false short messages
Dear Xiao Ling,
I’m very glad to receive your letter today.

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ling,
I’m very glad to receive your letter today. How are you getting along with your study?
In your letter, you asked me whether you should buy a mobile phone or not. In m opinion, it is unnecessary for a student. Why? First, using a mobile phone takes up too much time to send or receive shore messages. Therefore the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter. Second, it is forbidden to utilize mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class. Otherwise, your behavior can disturb others. Third, you may be disturbed by some false short messages. Furthermore, as a student without independent economy, you have to ask parents for the phone expense. That is, they will burden more to support you than before.
In short, I suggest that you consider my words twice.
Best wishes.
Your friend,
Li lei

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】In your letter, you asked me whether you should buy a mobile phone or not.这句话用了whether引导的宾语从句， it is unnecessary for a student. 这是it做形式主语的句型， using a mobile phone takes up too much time to send or receive shore messages.这句话是动名词做主语， the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter.这句话用了宾语从句， it is forbidden to utilize mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class.这句话也是用了it的形式主语，这篇文章还用了 In m opinion, First, Therefore Second, Otherwise, Third, Furthermore, That is,这些关联词使文章更加连贯。