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假定你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:

乐观的态度;2. 努力学习;3. 参加锻炼。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve it?____________________

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One possible version:

Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve this goal ?

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hardships. We should be brave in face of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to make our country stronger and enjoy our life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.

If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达要求以“健康成长”为内容写一篇短文,要包括乐观的态度;努力学习;和参加锻炼等三方面内容。文字要求只给出了提纲,在写作时需要同学们发挥想象,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,内容丰满。比如努力学习的目的,参加锻炼的好处等等。同时,在写作时也要使用恰当的连接词,比如表顺序的词first ,second ,third,表示递进关系的 what’s more ,besides 等。为了增加文章的亮点,还应该尽量使用多种句式结构,比如定语从句,状语从句,非谓语等等。最后,要注意文章应使用一般现在时,用第一人称。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达短小精悍,要点全面,层次分明,语言连贯流畅。开头以设问的方式引出健康的话题。然后用firstly,secondly 和thirdly分别介绍了对待生活应持有的态度,要努力学习和积极锻炼等三方面要点。作者不仅使用了一些如consist of ,hardship,in face of等高级词汇、短语和连接词not only…..but also,同时还使用了条件状语从句If we have the power, If we do these things well,目的状语从句so that we can keep fit,这些都成为了文章的亮点所在,提高了文章的档次。

考点:考查提纲作文

 

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As we know, many teen celebrities(名人) feel and think that having a slimmer figure can do great good to them. But, does size really matter? Are teenage fans trying hard to become like their celebrity idols(偶像)? Do celebrities really have the power to influence people, especially teenagers?

For the longest time, many parents blame teen idols for influencing the way their kids act. Have you noticed how teens idolize the celebrities these days? Even, their personal affairs are being followed by kids these days. Take for example the case of Lindsay Lohan of Mary Kate Ashley. They are definitely famous teen stars. But, since they are trying to project an image to satisfy a lot of people in show business, their health and body suffer. Many kids are aware of this problem. But they are easily influenced by these celebrities to exercise and eat less.

It is a fact that the media, and especially famous teen celebrities, can influence people powerfully. But teenagers are easily influenced because teenage years are the period when our personality and identity developments take place. Teens watching TV shows and reading magazines are easily pulled into the dieting and harmful eating habits because the media have some ways to pull these acts. They use thin models and celebrities to endorse(做广告宣传) products or to star in an up-and –coming shows or movies. With fierce competition, celebrities are forced to eat less and do extreme exercise routines to get the roles or offers that come their way.

Living in today’s time and generation is a bit disturbing to a lot of parents. Media, especially as well as the celebrities, have a very powerful influence to drive teenagers to good or bad. It’s good that we can control ourselves to avoid bad things from happening. If not, parents should really be aware and guide their teens to determine what’s in ad what’s out.

1.From the passage we can find Lindsay Lohan .

A. lives an unhealthy lifestyle

B. lives a rich and happy life

C. doesn’t get any exercise

D. sets a good example for teenagers

2.According to the writer, why are teenagers easily influenced by some TV shows?

A. They are tired of school.

B. Their celebrity idols appear in many TV shows.

C. They’re in their development period.

D. They have nothing to do in their spare time

3. Many celebrities have to be on diet .

A. to keep healthy to face competition

B. to survive under pressure

C. to keep a slim size

D. to satisfy their teenage fans

4.What’s the title of the passage?

A. Parents’ responsibilities.

B. Advice on self-control.

C. Bad influences of celebrities.

D. Media’s bad influences.

 

People in the United States honor their parents with two special days: mother’s day, on the second Sunday in May, and Father’s day, on the third Sunday in June. These days are set aside to show love and respect for parents. They raise their children and educate them to be responsible citizens. They give love and care. These two days make us think about the changing roles of mothers and fathers. More mothers now work outside the home. More fathers must help with child care.

These two special days are celebrated in many different ways. On Mother’s Day people wear carnations. A red one symbolizes a living mother. A white one shows that the mother is dead. Many people attend religious services to honor parents. It is also a day when people whose parents are dead visit the cemetery(墓地). On these days,families get together at home, as well as in restaurants. They often have outdoor barbecues for Father’s Day. These are days of fun and good feelings and memories.

Another tradition is to give cards and gifts. Children make them in school. Many people make their own presents. These are valued more than the ones bought in stores. It is not the value of the gift that is important, but it is “the thought that counts”. Greeting card stores, florists, candy makers, bakeries(面包师), telephone companies, and other stores do a lot of business during these holidays.

1.Which of the following is NOT a reason for children to show love and respect for parents?

A. Parents bring up children.

B. Parents give love and care to children.

C. Parents educate children to be good persons.

D. Parents pass away before children grow up.

2.On Father’s Day, what do people often do?

A. They wear carnations.

B. They have outdoor barbecues.

C. They attend religious services to honor parents.

D. They visit the cemetery.

3.What do you think “florists” do? _________.

A. They sell flowers.

B. They make and sell bread.

C. They offer enough room for having family parties.

D. They sell special gifts for Mother’s Day and Father’s Day.

4.Which do you think is right about “carnation”? _________.

A. It has only two kinds of colors.

B. It refers to the special clothes people wear on Mother’s Day or Father’s Day.

C. It’s a kind of flower showing love and best wishes.

D. People can wear carnations only on the second Sunday in May.

 

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