Question

假设你叫李华，欲与来自本校不同班级的另外4名同学组建一支乐队，但缺乏经验，请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生发一封电子邮件，以寻求帮助。

1. 成员中有三名男生和两名女生，均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈；

2. 每周周末排练是否足够？初期演唱的音乐宜多元化还是一种风格？

3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会？

4. 希望他能为乐队取个名字。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. e-mail的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician,

 

 

 

Best wishes

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance. I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. And is it enough to practise only at weekends? How can we get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一封电子邮件。做题前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。这篇作文的要点是以提纲列出的，而且很详细，考生要做的是将要点全面的合理的解释清楚，应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。多使用高级词汇和重点句型。

【亮点说明】范文使用了各种多变的句式：Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. 这句话使用since引导的原因状语从句，I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. 这句话使用了插入语， I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. 这句话使用了宾语从句，And is it enough to practise only at weekends? 这句话使用it做形式主语。We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.这句话使用了it做形式宾语。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达