假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写得以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改: 在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following
advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you
lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily

【小题1】is后面加a
【小题2】advices改为advice
【小题3】in改为of
【小题4】去掉it
【小题5】loud改为louder
【小题6】him改为them
【小题7】trying改为try
【小题8】share改为shares
【小题9】unless改为if
【小题10】possibly改为possible

解析试题分析：Lily在信中对金晶的问题提出了建议：要相信自己，微笑面对同学，让他们相信你是友好的；先试着与一个和你同样害羞的或与你有同样爱好的同学交谈，可以问一些学习上的问题，谈谈共同的爱好；帮助学习和生活上有困难的同学。
【小题1】is后面加a，后面的名词one是一个可数名词，使用冠词a修饰。
【小题2】advices改为advice，名词advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
【小题3】in改为of ，固定搭配first of all最重要的；
【小题4】去掉it ，你需要做的第一件事是微笑面对同学。The first thing后面是定语从句，省略关系代词that，that在定语从句中是宾语，所以it是多余的。
【小题5】loud改为louder，根据后面的than说明使用比较级的形式。
【小题6】him改为them，这里的them是指上句的classmates。
【小题7】trying改为try，本句是一个祈使句，所以使用动词原形构成。
【小题8】share改为shares ，本句的定语从句的先行词是a student，是单数形式，故share也使用单数。
【小题9】unless改为if，句意：如果有人遇见麻烦，你应该乐于帮助别人。所以if表示条件，不需要使用unless（如果…不…）
【小题10】possibly改为possible，本句中使用副词possibly作为状语修饰动词短语make as many friends as possible.
考点：考查短文改错

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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