Question

某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法。假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并说明理由。100词左右。

(注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内。)

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.

The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages. The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well. Without that, we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries, people and cultures. Besides, going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money, it could also bring serious problems. Taking care of themselves is one of them.

In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves, when the chance to study abroad arrives, we'll grasp it and make the best use.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如go abroad，it necessary for sb. to do，at present，have a good understanding of，take care of，in one’s opinion，devote … to …；还运用which引导的非限定性定语从句，动名词短语作主语；并注意了句子的衔接如and，not only … but …，besides，when等等。

考点：提纲类写作