题目内容

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容写作要点要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter:be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school,but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议。
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is_____________________________________________________________________________
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Hi,TigerMom,
What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China.My_idea_is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
本文是一封回信,也是一篇半开放性的作文。题材比较新颖,对考生的要求也比较高,要求考生根据前一封信筛选要点,学习成绩不是衡量学生的唯一标准,应该让学生自由发展这应该是回信的要点所在。在写作时要注意使用较高级的词汇如mentally and physically.也应该使用一些好的关联词如Furthermore等!
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
One day, Zeng’s wife decided to go out for shopping, but her little son insisted on going with her to the market. Thinking that she would come back very soon, and that the naughty boy would bring her a lot oftrouble, she was unwilling to do so.
In order to persuade the boy to stay home, she told him, “Oh, come on, good boy, if you listen to Mom and then Mom will give you a present when I am back.”    
“What present are you going to give me, Mom?” asked the son.
“We haven’t eaten meat for a long time, so I will kill our pig and let you enjoy a big nice dinner.” The mother comforted the boy when it happened that their pig was wandering in front of the house. Just at that time, her husband came back and heard what she said. Thinking of the nice meal, the boy gave in.
Not very soon, the mother came back, but what she saw shocked her. It was her husband who had killed the only pig of the poor family.
“Why did you kill it? You know that it is very important for my family.” she scolded him.
“I did that just for your promise!” Mr. Zeng answered.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括这则中国寓言故事;
2. 以约120个词,从“曾子”或者“曾子之妻”的行为任选一个角度发表你的看法,并包括如下要点:
(1) 你赞同“曾子”还是“曾子之妻”的做法?并说出理由;
(2) 叙述你一次诚实守信的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
[写作要求] 1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

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