Question

假如你是李华，你进入邢台一中开始了新的高中生活。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何迎接你的高中生活。内容要点应包括：
1.确定学习目标和改进学习方法.
2.处理好与同学的关系.
3.参加各种课外活动.
注意：（1）短文的内容要连贯、完整；
（2）短文字数：100左右。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

With time going on, the new high school life is coming near.
After I enter high school, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some homework and studying by myself.
In my spare time，I will take part in different kinds of school activities to enlarge my knowledge. For example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at high school.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文：谈谈你如何迎接你的高中生活。要点都给出了，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。因为只是提纲，没有具体的要点，要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】With time going on, the new high school life is coming near.这句话用了with符合结构， it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some homework and studying by myself.这句话用了it做形式主语， In my spare time，I will take part in different kinds of school activities to enlarge my knowledge. I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. 这两句话用了不定式做目的状语，还有范文还用了 What’s more, In addition, For example,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。