题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华。你校英语演讲协会将选举新一届主席,你欲参选。请用英语写一篇演讲稿,要点包括:1.你的个人优势;
2.未来活动设想;
3.希望当选。
注意:1.字数100词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾己为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association._________________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
【答案】Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association.
Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires,I feel I am qualified First of all.I'm fluent in oral English and have worked as a part-time travel guide for foreigners.Secondly,I am outgoing,warm-hearted and really good at communicating with strangers. Moreover,I like giving speeches publicly I think it's a good way to build one's confidence.
If I am elected.I will organize different kinds of activities such as English Culture Festival and English Coffee Time,where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.
Thank you.
【解析】试题分析:
本次作文要求用英语写一篇演讲稿来竞选新一届主席。写作要点包括:
1.竞选职位:英语演讲协会将选举新一届主席。
2.个人优势:(1)英语口语流利而且曾兼职过外国人的导游(2)性格开朗、热心,善于与陌生人打交道。(3))更为重要的是喜欢在公众场合演讲。3.中选后的决心及设想。组织各种活动让学生们有更多的机会练习英语和提高英语水平,尽力成为一届好的主席。
写作亮点:本篇要点齐全,紧扣主题,行文连贯,结构连贯。其句式多变化,使得文章生动而流畅,体现了作者驾驭句式的能力,整个文章一气呵成。
写作中使用多个复杂句子。例如:
运用了状语从句If I am elected. I will organize different kinds of activities和I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.状语从句。
运用了定语从句where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English。
使用了宾语从句Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires 。
运用了表示顺序的连接词,如first of all, secondly, moreover.
使用变化多样的句式。如使用了非谓语Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires, I feel I am qualified。