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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I am deep impressed by the great changes that have taken the place in the school over the past three years. On May 12, 2008, a sever earthquake destroyed almost nothing in the school, left badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, included laboratory buildings and a library. There was also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily or working hard. It is really amazing if the once-ruined place has now turned into a beautiful school, full of life. Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there will be no new school today.


【小题1】 deep改成deeply
【小题2】去掉the
【小题3】nothing 改成everything
【小题4】left改成 leaving
【小题5】taking后面加 on
【小题6】included改成 including
【小题7】was改成 is
【小题8】or改成 and
【小题9】if改成 that
【小题10】will改成 would

解析试题分析：文章介绍了地震三年后，在整个社会的帮忙下，学校发生的巨大的变化。
【小题1】我对过去三年学校发生的巨大的变化深深的打动了。修饰impessed用副词：deep改成deeply
【小题2】词组：发生“take place”去掉the
【小题3】2008年的5月12号，一场大地震毁了我们学校的一切，nothing 改成everything
【小题4】留下严重受损的房子。left改成 leaving是现在分词做结果状语
【小题5】现在它呈现出了新的面貌。Take on呈现
【小题6】高楼已经被建成，包括图书馆和实验楼，包含： including，included放在名词后面。
【小题7】也有个新建的标准球场。因为说的是现在的情况用一般现在时：was改成 is
【小题8】在新的环境中老师和同学过的很幸福，工作学习很努力。这是并列关系：or改成 and
【小题9】曾经被毁了的地方变成了一个美丽的学校真是 让人惊叹。It是形式主语，that引导的是真正的主语从句
【小题10】没有整个社会的帮忙，也没有我们现在新的学校。这是隐含的虚拟语气；will改成 would
考点：考查短文改错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
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1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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