Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Boys and girls! I’d like to share my swimming experience with you. My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at the pond. I slipped into it. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have drowned. Since then, I had come to know the important of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim looks awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me floating. Think of this, I feel quite satisfying.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】extreme→extremely

【2】swim→swam

【3】the→a

【4】have ∧ drowned.加been

【5】had→have

【6】important→importance

【7】去掉at

【8】difficult→difficulty

【9】Think→Thinking

【10】satisfying→satisfied

【解析】

试题分析：作者的一次游泳经历。

【1】extreme→extremely 副词修饰形容词，故把extreme改为extremely。

【2】swim→swam 根据句意可知，用一般过去时态，故把swim改为swam。

【3】the→a 句意：在一个池塘遇到我的一个朋友。故把the改为a。

【4】have ∧ drowned.加been 句意：我将会被淹死。此处是被动语态，故在have 和drowned之间加been。

【5】had→have 根据Since then（自从那时起……），可知句子用现在完成时态，故把had改为have。

【6】important→importance 表示“学游泳的重要性”，此处用名词形式作动词的宾语，故把important改为importance。

【7】去掉at attend是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故去掉at。

【8】difficult→difficulty have no difficulty (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困难。故把difficult改为difficulty。

【9】Think→Thinking 句意：我考虑到这个，我感到满意。Think与主语I是主动关系，故用现在分词作时间状语，故把Think改为Thinking。

【10】satisfying→satisfied 修饰人用-ed形式的形容词，故把 satisfying改为satisfied。

【知识归纳】

1.以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

2. 介词后面用动名词做宾语He left home without telling his parents.他没告诉他的父母就离开了家。

温馨提示：be busy with sth.忙于某事/be busy doing sth.忙于做某事；spend---on sth. 在某事上花费---/spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花费---；have difficulty(trouble/problems) with sth.在某事上有困难/ have difficulty(trouble/problems) (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困难。