假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换个性作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除.或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 .并在其下面写出该加的单词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写上修改后的词. 注意:1.每处错误以及修改均仅限一词. 2 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换个性作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除、或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的单词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误以及修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者从（第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mom,

Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But today, at this special time, I just want tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by giving me life. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may not often say it, but I do love you. Nobody is much important than you in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Here I sincere hope you will be happy and healthy forever !

I`m looking forward to hear from you very often.

Your little girl,

Jennifer

【答案】

your改为you

thank改为thanks

tell 前加 to

by改为for

had改为have

去掉though或者but皆可以

把much改为more或在其后加more

Whenever改为Wherever /Whatever

sincere-sincerely

hear-hearing

【解析】

试题分析：

your改为you send sb sth送东西给某人；其中的sb用宾格的形式，故使用you.

thank改为thanks 固定词组thanks to….对…的感激。

tell 前加 to 固定词组want to do sth想要做某事

by改为for 固定词组thank sb for sth因为…感谢某人

had改为have 本文只表示到现在为止已经完成，故使用一般现在时。

去掉though或者but皆可以 though与but不能连用，故要删除其中之一。

把much改为more或在其后加more Much修饰比较级。

Whenever改为Wherever /Whatever 句意：无论我在那里…我都会爱你。Whenever无论何时的语义与句子不搭配。

sincere-sincerely 用副词sincerely做状语修饰整个句子。

hear-hearing to是介词，后面接动名词的形式。

考点：考查短文纠错

点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力，要特别注意固定的词组或者句型和名词的单复数形式以及时态。

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