Question

13．月20日是中国学生营养日．某中学生英文报为此开展征文比赛活动，请根据以下要点写一篇征文，谈谈你对中国肥胖儿童现象的看法和建议．
内容要点：
1．描述现状：中国肥胖儿童1200多万；
2．说明理由：常吃快餐、缺少锻炼；
3．提出建议：…
注意：
1．可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
2．词数120左右．
参考词汇：肥胖：obesity；营养：nutrition
No More Child Obesity．

Answer 1

分析 亮点句型一：One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．这个问题的主要原因是孩子们对于垃圾食品上瘾，这些垃圾食品给吃的人增加了太多的脂肪．本句是一个复合句，that 引导的是一个限制性定语从句，先行词为factors；which引导的是非限制性定语从句，先行词为junk food．
亮点句型二：A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．很多的孩子宁愿坐几个小时享受自己在虚拟世界里也不愿定期锻炼．would rather do…than do…是"宁愿做某事也不愿做某事"是英语中的固定句型．

解答 Recent yeats have witnessed a growing number of up to 12 million children in China getting more and more overweight．【现状描述】
When it comes to the obesity problem，the reasons are not far to seek．One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it（亮点句型一）．Another factor to mention is children's lack of exercise in everyday life．A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than exercise regularly（亮点句型二）．To make matters worse，the fact that many children stay up late into night also contributes to the problem．【阐明原因】
Personally I do believe it is of great importance to keep a balanced diet，which guarantees proper nutrition in our diet．What's more，a healthy  lifestyle is the key to a happy life．After all，it is a healthy body and mind that really matters in promising us a brighter future．【个人观点】

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．