Question

【题目】请阅读下面图片和文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

Today with the development of technology, people own all kinds of mobiles phones. Wherever you go, it’s not uncommon to see people obsessed with mobile phones, taking photos, watching videos online, or getting caught up in checking or updating their WeChat Moments. Our life seems to have been taken over by mobile phones and we live in a virtual world created by mobile phones, where we no longer have intimate( 亲 密 的 )conversations that bring belly laughs.

Well aware that the overuse of phones will hurt relationships, many people have had enough of this non-interaction, especially when getting together or over meals, and changes are being made at houses. Many Chinese families set a strict “no phones at the dinner table” policy, which hopefully will stop their kids from becoming addicted to mobile phones and prevent more digital invasion of our personal space.

（写作内容）

1. 用约 30 个词概述上述图片和文字的内容；

2. 用约 120 个词就”餐桌上禁用手机”这一话题，谈谈你的看法，内容包括:

(1) 简要阐述这种做法的必要性；

(2) 结合实际，就如何避免沉迷于手机提出几点建议(不少于两点)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays mobile phones are affecting interpersonal communication so much that people tend to be glued to mobile phones over meals, ignoring the nice food being served. Luckily, many Chinese families ban mobile phones at the dinner table.

I sing high praise for the practice. With the fast development of technology, digital devices have taken up people’s little spare time that should have been spent on face-to-face communication with family members. In this case, the practice serves as a timely reminder that people should reflect on their daily behavior concerning phone use and reverse the trend, helping restore dining traditions.

It’s high time that we took effective measures to get rid of our addiction to mobile phones. Firstly, we can limit our use of them purposely, leaving room for real-life communication. Secondly, we can take part in various activities to improve our interpersonal relationships and reach out for our phones only when necessary. Only in this way can we prevent too much digital invasion of our lives.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文。先用30个词概述图片与文字内容，再结合生活实际，针对沉迷于手机提几点建议。题干中没有给出具体建议，同学们要结合自己生活实际，适当发挥。

第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。第一段总结部分人称使用第三人称，时态使用一般现在时，描述客观现象。其余段落以第一人称和第三人称为主，描述沉迷于手机的危害以及自己的看法与建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

sing high praise for（高度赞扬）；taken up people’s little spare time（占用了人们的业余时间）；face-to-face communication with…（与……面对面交流）；a timely reminder（及时的提醒）；reflect on their daily behavior（反思日常行为）；leaving room for（为……留有空间）；improve our interpersonal relationships（改善人际关系）等。

第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。

第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。