Question

4．假如你是某中学的学生Tom．前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖．请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会．内容主要包括：
1付出才有回报；
2收获自信和友谊；
3感激之情．
注意：1词数100左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3开头语巳为你写好，不计入总词数．
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖的体会．这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：付出才有回报；收获自信和友谊；感激之情．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖．第二部分为．获奖体会．
重点短语与句型：
look back to 负担…
take part in  熬夜
establish the friendship 另一方面
in public充分利用
高分句型一：Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition that I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．此句用了现在分词作伴随状语以及that 引导的定语从句
高分句型二：Additionally，I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges，without whose help，I couldn't have done such an excellent job．此句用了介词+whose+n 引导的定语从句

解答 Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．（高分句型一）（参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖）
    Firstly，I feel really delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition，which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb"No pains，no gains"．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from whom I've learned a lot．More importantly，taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public，thus developing my self-confidence．Additionally，I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges，without whose help，I couldn't have done such an excellent job（高分句型二）．To sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience（获奖体会）

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．