Question

【题目】假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家外企公司招聘秘书的广告，请你根据下列要点提示给经理写一封应聘信。

1) 今年20岁，即将毕业于职业院校。主修经济管理。

2) 学习英语超过八年了，熟悉电脑操作；在过去曾任学生报的编辑，有写作和编辑经验；在校成绩优秀。

3) 性格外向，交际能力强。

要求：1) 内容要连贯、完整。

2) 叙述必须用第一人称。

3) 字数:100左右。

参考词汇：职业院校vocational school；主修 major in 经验experience 操作operate

经济管理 business management

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I’m going to graduate from a vocational school. I major in business management . Besides, I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation. In the last three years, I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper, which makes me experienced in writing and editing. I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others. I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文要求考生根据提示写一封应聘信。信的内容包括：假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家外企公司招聘秘书的广告，请你根据下列要点提示给经理写一封应聘信。

1) 今年20岁，即将毕业于职业院校。主修经济管理。

2) 学习英语超过八年了，熟悉电脑操作；在过去曾任学生报的编辑，有写作和编辑经验；在校成绩优秀。

3) 性格外向，交际能力强。

要求：1) 内容要连贯、完整。 2) 叙述必须用第一人称。

本文亮点：文中运用了多种的句式，如开头用简单句和并列句介绍自己， “My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I’m going to graduate from a vocational school.”和“I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation.”简单但内容清晰。接着又适当的扩展，使用一个非限制性定语从句进一步介绍自己，如“In the last three years, I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper, which makes me experienced in writing and editing.”，宾语从句“I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary”， 文中多处运用到好的固定短语如“in response to，major in business management，be good at communicating with others. ,look forward to your reply.”最后用一句条件状语从句“I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company.”表达了自己的意愿。文章逻辑层次分明，条理清晰，并且结尾有礼有节，是一篇较好的考场作文。