Question

感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多快乐。假如你校拟举行一次有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点：
1. 感恩对象（如：父母、老师、朋友……）；
2. 为何感恩；
3. 如何感恩；
注意：
只能选择一个感恩对象；
可对所给要点做适当发挥；
演讲稿中不得提及考生所在的学校师生或本人姓名；
词数在130字左右；开头已给出（不计词数）。
Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”                                                                          
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                             
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible student version: 
Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”
Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during the stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother. 
Listen, time is pressing. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. I have another message for everyone here; Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her and her face will light up. Thank you for listening.

解析试题分析：本书面表达是要求学生写“感恩”为话题的演讲稿，是一篇典型的提纲作文，在写作之前要注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be blessed with，keep sb. company，as … as possible，on top of that, cheer up，be fortunate to do，realize dreams， appeal to，light up；还运用高级词汇appreciate，unconditional等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：whenever等等。
考点：提纲作文