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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost but she couldn’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. I felt very happy and thought we really did the good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.


【小题1】was ---- were
【小题2】cry ---- crying
【小题3】but ---- and
【小题4】try  --- tried
【小题5】best后加to
【小题6】on---at
【小题7】careful --- carefully
【小题8】his ---her
【小题9】the----a  
【小题10】去掉with

解析试题分析：
【小题1】根据lots of people，故用were。
【小题2】“一个小女孩”和“哭”之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词。所以cry ---- crying。
【小题3】句意：她迷路了并且她找不到自己的妈妈。表示并列关系，所以but ---- and。
【小题4】 表示发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
【小题5】try one’s best to do sth.是固定句型，意思是尽某人最大的努力。
【小题6】句意：同时，Lily和她一起玩。At the same time是固定用法，意思是同时。
【小题7】用副词修饰动词，所以careful --- carefully。
【小题8】前面提到是一个小女孩，所以his ---her。
【小题9】泛指“我们真的做了一件好事”。所以the----a。
【小题10】帮助某人，直接说help sb.，所以去掉with。
考点：考查短文改错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。   
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。   
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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