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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.
Best regards,
Janet

小题1:parent 改成parents
小题2:is 改成does
小题3:is ∧the
小题4:few 改成little
小题5:or 改成nor
小题6:wanted 改成want
小题7:like as
小题8:ourselves改成us
小题9:去掉far
小题10:where 改成which

试题分析:这是Janet 写给Lucy的信,Lucy要来xi’an,Janet表示欢迎,并表示要带Janet到一些景点游玩。
小题1:我的父母都很想念你。Both后面接名词复数:parent 改成parents
小题2:我们的朋友也是。因为Both my parent miss you a lot.指用了实意动词miss,所以后面也应该用助动词: is 改成does
小题3:四月是来西安的最好的时间。Best前面加the
小题4:这里雨水少。few 修饰可数名词复数,改成little修饰不可数名词
小题5:天气既不太冷,也不太热。使用neither…nor
小题6:我有这么地方可以带你去的。这篇文章使用一般现在时:wanted 改成want
小题7:在我做完当地的慈善机构的志愿者以后。Like“象”,改成 as“做为”
小题8:你来的时候,你可以和我们住在一起。主语是you,所以不要反身代词:ourselves改成us
小题9:我的家离西安的Moslem Street有3公里远。three kilometers和far重复。去掉far
小题10:这里使用定语从句,定语从句中缺少主语,用which引导定语从句:where 改成which
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