Question

班级要开学习经验交流会, 班长让你根据下面提示写一篇学习英语的经验的发言稿:
课前预习；
课堂活动；
课后作业；
其他学习方法（至少两项）。
注意：1. 文章开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 词数：120左右；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
I feel honored to say something about learning English here.                           

Answer 1

Boys and girls,
I feel honored to say something about learning English here. In learning English, I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class, making marks where we have questions. And in class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. After class, it is better to finish our homework on time.
In our spare time, we must pay attention to our notes. We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order.
When we have problems in learning English, we must turn to the teacher for help.  It is very useful to learn good sentences by heart. It is also important to read aloud and read more English articles.
May you study well.   
That’s all.   Thank you.  

试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，话题是关于“学习英语的经验”动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字数限制，另外注意题目的要求，按照顺序去写，注意不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。此外还要用适当的关联词把句子串联起来，使文章更加连贯。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达语言自然流畅，段落清楚，层次分明。在本文中作者使用了一些好的词组和句型：In our spare time在我们的空闲时间, pay attention to注意， have problems in doing 做…有困难，turn to the teacher for help向…求助， learn sth by heart 记住，In learning English, I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class, making marks where we have questions. 这句话用了定语从句，非谓语动词和地点状语从句， After class, it is better to finish our homework on time这句话用了it做形式主语，.We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order. 这句话用了宾语从句， May you study well.这句话用了虚拟语气。