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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in Grade 3 after I realize it. It is only a little more than seven months before I graduated from our school. At the present, I’m busy review my lessons in order to take the college entrance examinations. I hope attend Beijing University, that is considered to be one of the best. Most of my classmate are studying very hard to realize our dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very well university.


【小题1】as –like
【小题2】after—before
【小题3】graduated—graduate
【小题4】at the present --the 去掉
【小题5】review—reviewing
【小题6】hope后加to
【小题7】that—which
【小题8】classmate—classmates
【小题9】our –their
【小题10】well---good

解析试题分析：文章介绍一个高三的学生感到时间的窘迫，已经近阶段的打算，和自己理想的大学。
【小题1】as做为“象”讲，是连词，后面要接从句，而这句话用的是an arrow ，表示“时间就像箭一样快”，用like
【小题2】句意：我还没意识到呢已经三年了。after—before
【小题3】before引导的是时间状语从句，用的是一般现在时代替一般将来时：graduated—graduate
【小题4】at present是固定词组“现在” --the 是多余的，
【小题5】be busy doing忙于做…，review—reviewing
【小题6】hope后加不定式做宾语，加to
【小题7】句意：我希望上北京大学，这被认为是最好的大学之一。非限制性定语从句不能用that连接： that—which
【小题8】Most of  my后面接可数名词复数：classmate—classmates
【小题9】主语是my classmate用 their代替
【小题10】well做为“好”是副词，做形容词是“健康的”，good是形容词，修饰university
考点：考查短文改错

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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
　　   2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9: 00 am, I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10: 00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took to us about two hours to see it. Having seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some friends even burst out tears. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day!  I hope tomorrow I will be even happier!

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show itto my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoyingto find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smilingcontently. How delighted I was! 

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realized my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ken,
I’m very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I’m glad you had a wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace and quite, which is what I can’t enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days. In fact, I had never been had a better holiday before. I took plenty photos there and I keep them where I can see them every day as they always reminds me of my stay in the country。
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Li Ping

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10出语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词
注意：1.没处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
May 10,2009                                              Fine
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