题目内容

请你根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
It doesn't really matter whether your glass is half empty or half full. Be thankful that you have a glass and that there's something in it.
注意: ①无须写标题;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为120左右,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。


In our journey of life, it's our great fortune to meet with something or someone. Be grateful for what they bring us and cherish what we have, no matter they are rich or poor, happy or sad, good or bad. Just like our drinking glass, whether half full or half empty, we are lucky to have such a glass and own what there is in it.   
Take Helen Keller, a famous American writer as an example. Deprived of sight and hearing by a disease, she became disabled when she was young. Instead of feeling depressed and complaining “Why Me”, she chose a positive attitude to life and regarded what she encountered as the best gift God gave her. Bearing gratitude for life within, she met with her lifelong teacher Sullivan and finished her famous novel “Three Days to See”. It was the painful times of her life that made her stronger, wiser and more loving.
Though pain is inevitable, suffering is optional. When we are experiencing hard times, it becomes more challenging to be grateful. Be grateful for our life with all its lessons and blessings, and success and happiness is just around the corner!

解析试题分析:本题属于全开放性作文,对考生驾驭语言的能力要求较高。做题时不但要注意语言的规范性、文章的连贯性、表达的得体性、词汇句式的丰富性等一般书面表达题要求达到的水准,还要牢记题目要求,围绕话题阐述观点,所举事例要能证明自己的观点,有紧密的相关性。
考点:书面表达。
【亮点】本文较好的完成了题目规定的任务。文章第一段开宗明义:生活旅程中我们碰到的人和事都是我们的财富。第二段以海伦凯勒为例,说明对待生活中不幸的积极态度是她取得人生成功的关键因素。最后一段点题:不幸难以避免、痛苦并非必然。从其遣词造句来看,作者对英语语言有相当的驾驭能力。作者使用了一系列高级词汇,如:fortune, grateful, cherish, deprive sb. of sth. encounter, inevitable, optional, blessing; 独立主格结构bearing attitude for life within等。

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阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As a person in modern society,you should never forget that everyone needs encouragement. And everybody who receives it is changed by it. It was novelist Mark Twain who said :“One compliment can keep me going for a whole month.”      
The impact that encouragement makes on people can be deep and significant. A word of encouragement from a teacher to a child can change a life. A word of encouragement from a spouse
can save a marriage. A word of encouragement from a leader can inspire a person to reach his potential. Like Zig Ziglar says,” You never know when a few sincere words can have an impact on a life.”     
I’ve read that the 19th century writer Walt Whitman struggled for years to get anyone interested in his poetry. In the midst of his discouragement,Whitman received a life-changing letter from an admirer of his work. The note read:“ Dear sir, I am not blind to the worth of the wonderful gift of Leaves of Grass. I find it the most extraordinary piece of wit and wisdom that America has yet contributed. I greet you at the beginning of a great career.” It was signed by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
Whitman enjoyed a long career and is now considered one of the giants of' American literature. But when times were tough,he needed encouragement to keep him going.
This season is the perfect time to give a gift everybody wants—and everyone needs.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2.然后以约120个词就¨鼓励对人生的影响”进行议论,内容包括:
(1) 以事例说明鼓励对人的影响;
(2) 谈谈你的认识或感想。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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