Question

短文改错

　　My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are

(1) _________

kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and

(2) _________

trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.

(3) _________

In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more

(4) _________

beautiful. After autumn arrives, the city looks as an

(5) _________

old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter,

(6) _________

a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can

(7) _________

wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long

(8) _________

time. While they find fish come to the surface,

(9) _________

they fly down immediate and catch them without

(10) __________

delay. That is my city, and I love it so much.

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

(1)so改为and My hometown is a pretty city与people there are kind and polite是并列关系，不是因果关系。 (2)coming前加the 春天的到来，应为特指。 (3)grew改为grow 整篇文章用了现在时态，因此grow也应用现在时态。 (4)skies改为sky sky为独一无二的东西。 (5)as改为like look like为固定短语，“看起来像”。 (6)fallen改为falling 此处为with复合结构，leave与fall之间是主谓关系，因此fall应用现在分词。 (7)I改为They 主语要一致，上文指的white birds，因此此处应用they代替white birds。 (8)去掉more 本句句意无比较的含义，因此应去掉more。 (9)While改为When while表示段时间，而此处的find为瞬间动词，因此此处应用when，when既可表段时间，也可表点时间。 (10)immediate改为immediately fly为动词，应用副词修饰。